tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-376223885962725313.post1563018855279315027..comments2022-09-08T01:59:21.584-05:00Comments on ellen has an opinion . . .: haikusellenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15216639533812087840noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-376223885962725313.post-80012153946746353242010-05-12T22:24:00.147-05:002010-05-12T22:24:00.147-05:00Late to the party
Not good at making up rhymes
Bet...Late to the party<br />Not good at making up rhymes<br />Better at counting<br /><br />Long summer ahead<br />Want to hear "Cubs win. Cubs win!"<br />Not, "Wait til next year."<br /><br />Waiting for money<br />100 K will spend fast<br />Poetry lessonsShanenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-376223885962725313.post-51873379700684025312010-05-12T14:48:05.807-05:002010-05-12T14:48:05.807-05:00Will said...
I am doing well
the recovery is grea...Will said...<br /><br />I am doing well<br />the recovery is great<br />I really love her<br /><br />It was a joke El<br />You know I don't hate Michelle<br />She is wonderful<br /><br />I'm actually<br />Very pleased with the Haikus<br />They are very funAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-376223885962725313.post-4624868355059908642010-05-11T22:27:10.903-05:002010-05-11T22:27:10.903-05:00Rob's fridge poem rocks.
My moma is funny too....Rob's fridge poem rocks.<br />My moma is funny too.<br />Will, don't hate your wife.<br /><br />These comments thrill me.<br />Haikus must come here again.<br />Check local listings.ellenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15216639533812087840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-376223885962725313.post-25627735456997987652010-05-11T13:44:47.237-05:002010-05-11T13:44:47.237-05:00I would join the fun, but a) Moma clearly writes t...I would join the fun, but a) Moma clearly writes the best poetry, and b) I once wrote a non-rhyming poem with magnetic poetry and it used up every bit of my lifetimes worth of creativity. It's still on Mac's fridge, if you want to read it.Rob-Bobhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01871900185090584524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-376223885962725313.post-42126783012611967862010-05-11T09:30:22.638-05:002010-05-11T09:30:22.638-05:00I said I should post
one or two simple verses
to p...I said I should post<br />one or two simple verses<br />to prove I am fun.<br /><br />This is my first time <br />to author verse in haiku.<br />It is not that tough.<br /><br />My spouse posts ill words<br />about her man in much pain.<br />I think I hate her.Willnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-376223885962725313.post-32964158546404429092010-05-10T22:52:11.334-05:002010-05-10T22:52:11.334-05:00I'm with Moma on this one! However, Will thou...I'm with Moma on this one! However, Will thought about joining you and Joshua with a haiku or two of his own. But I guess he got too busy lying around waiting for back surgery to play.Michellenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-376223885962725313.post-90511051522756913472010-05-10T20:44:44.993-05:002010-05-10T20:44:44.993-05:00Roses are red
Violets are blue
Rhymes are much bet...Roses are red<br />Violets are blue<br />Rhymes are much better <br />Than any hiaku.Momanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-376223885962725313.post-87866694079745634862010-05-10T16:39:16.410-05:002010-05-10T16:39:16.410-05:00My moma's not a fan
Of syllabic poetry
I think...My moma's not a fan<br />Of syllabic poetry<br />I think it's her loss.ellenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15216639533812087840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-376223885962725313.post-29993901149987535132010-05-07T19:22:43.486-05:002010-05-07T19:22:43.486-05:00The above haiku
only works with some effort
by slu...The above haiku<br />only works with some effort<br />by slurring agreeJoshuanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-376223885962725313.post-5825189914995713512010-05-07T19:19:19.231-05:002010-05-07T19:19:19.231-05:00I agree with Ellen
Moma is the best ever
Though ti...I agree with Ellen<br />Moma is the best ever<br />Though tied with Susan.Joshuanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-376223885962725313.post-78540337049431682672010-05-07T17:11:04.918-05:002010-05-07T17:11:04.918-05:00It's true you see
He/She is not me
I'm not...It's true you see<br />He/She is not me<br />I'm not that concise <br />And rarely that nice<br />I do poems that rhyme <br />At least most of the time<br />Instead of Haikus<br />Because I'm not concise. <br /><br />And I love my MacbookThe Poet Laureate of Dogwood Lanehttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Poet_Laureatenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-376223885962725313.post-69737898207761665372010-05-07T15:55:01.520-05:002010-05-07T15:55:01.520-05:00First time commenter.
I'm glad you're doi...First time commenter. <br />I'm glad you're doing haikus.<br />They make me smile big.Not Machttp://theappleblog.com/2010/02/08/why-not-to-buy-a-mac-now/noreply@blogger.com